tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24675970.post114590372665710195..comments2023-08-20T04:50:13.424-07:00Comments on Progress Report: the teenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03715799204792667828noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24675970.post-1145967030578362202006-04-25T05:10:00.000-07:002006-04-25T05:10:00.000-07:00Welcome back!Welcome back!The Music-Makerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18126082041533795799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24675970.post-1145908450141585452006-04-24T12:54:00.000-07:002006-04-24T12:54:00.000-07:00In this case, i don't think the pluperfect in the ...In this case, i don't think the pluperfect in the opening sentence adds anything; I'd just say "I opened". I'm not quite sure of the geography - are the white steps the same as the spiralling stairs?<BR/><BR/>The parenthesis in the sentence about the paintings is amusing, but to my (very limited) knowledge suggest kinds of art that wouldn't be very different. Maybe "unless priceless primitives" - and "Picasso" - one "c".<BR/><BR/>Your'e muddling the tense again - dropping into the pluperfect after being in teh simple past perfect. but I'd be interested to know why you wanted to be back in the carpark - you going for surgery or something?Christine McIntoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14198224025775398453noreply@blogger.com