tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24675970.post116195781427709929..comments2023-08-20T04:50:13.424-07:00Comments on Progress Report: Redraft.the teenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03715799204792667828noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24675970.post-1161968071845154962006-10-27T09:54:00.000-07:002006-10-27T09:54:00.000-07:00This is better - much. I'm not keen on the use of ...This is better - much. I'm not keen on the use of "upbeat" - strikes me as jarringly colloquial, esp. as you repeat it. What about "optimistic" or even just "cheerful"?<BR/><BR/>The pun: you should acknowledge the two meanings of the word - size and the run of musical notes which in itself suggests both someone practising and the the key in which a piece is written (again, I'm still away and without the poem - is there any mileage in making something of that? )<BR/><BR/>I'll think about Grace Notes - I've read it, and supervised an RPR in the past, but can't remember enogh about it to be wildly useful right now. What about something using the fact that grace notes are an extra to the note itself - a decoration? I'll check it out when I'm home tomorrow.Christine McIntoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14198224025775398453noreply@blogger.com