Sorry for the late arrival, but I have had an extremely busy and musical weekend!
"Myrtle's heart was pounding. The pouring rain clouded her vision through her newly broken glasses. Her nose tickled; there was a pungent smell of the outdoors in the air. Laughter echoed all around her, taunting her, closing in on her. She didn't know where she was running to, or when she would stop, but she knew why..."
Hope that's ok as I usually tend to write personal experiences.